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#8363573 - 09/13/15 03:22 PM Lead-in cover shot photo
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UPDATE: went with a different photo and added changes that everyone suggested

Screen Shot 2015-09-14 at 10.34.08 AM by Ty June, on Flickr

quick question. which photo should I use for a cover shot lead in photo for a review that I am writing?

A.

_MG_2887 by Ty June, on Flickr

B.

_MG_2867 by Ty June, on Flickr


I think that B would be better for the 2pg article layout spread because the image is on the right and people read from left to right. kind of conflicted about which image to use


Edited by Duc (09/14/15 09:39 AM)
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#8363692 - 09/13/15 05:36 PM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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Both A and B need to be touched up. I like B more, but only if you get rid of the orange ribbon.
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#8363717 - 09/13/15 05:59 PM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Kierf]
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besides the ribbon, what would you suggest Kierf? brighten it up more? i pulled back on adding alot of detail. somewhat at a loss and still trying to learn as much as I can
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#8363752 - 09/13/15 06:30 PM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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Some thoughts and suggestions.
Both are pretty muted. Dodge the cooler. Maybe adjust the contrast a bit. The color palette is all pretty consistent. If you're focusing on the cooler, make the cooler be more noticeable.

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#8363773 - 09/13/15 06:45 PM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Kierf]
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thank you
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BigAl: there is a huge difference between working out to be healthy, and ingesting 10 protein shakes a day, creatine, roids, etc.
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#8363979 - 09/13/15 09:54 PM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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Depends on where you plan to put the text, but A looks out of focus and B looks off in general. They both lack detail and color/contrast.
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#8363981 - 09/13/15 09:56 PM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: ]
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i'm re-editing b and adding in more detail and contrast while adding a bit more exposure to the cooler to make it the focal point of the picture
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JoeyBalls: Yup. That's why I said I workout to look good. If i wanted to be healthy. I'd swim.


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#8364117 - 09/14/15 01:17 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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update.

yay/nay??

Screen Shot 2015-09-14 at 2.13.19 AM by Ty June, on Flickr
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BigAl: there is a huge difference between working out to be healthy, and ingesting 10 protein shakes a day, creatine, roids, etc.
JoeyBalls: Yup. That's why I said I workout to look good. If i wanted to be healthy. I'd swim.


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#8364122 - 09/14/15 02:00 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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changed the wording again. sorry
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BigAl: there is a huge difference between working out to be healthy, and ingesting 10 protein shakes a day, creatine, roids, etc.
JoeyBalls: Yup. That's why I said I workout to look good. If i wanted to be healthy. I'd swim.


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#8364146 - 09/14/15 06:25 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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Two things I don't recall ever seeing in an ad:

-The product being out of focus
-A line break in the text (wait-ing)

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#8364223 - 09/14/15 07:57 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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Quick and dirty job. Id desaturate the background, get rid of the orange ribbon and make damn sure the cooler is in focus.

Screen Shot 2015-09-14 at 8.48.07 AM by Matt Proudfit, on Flickr
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#8364279 - 09/14/15 08:35 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: 2000CheetahStud]
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Did you just watermark someone elses photo? LOL
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#8364360 - 09/14/15 09:37 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: LNXGUY]
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i changed the wording out last night and tailored it to bears since the company is named Grizzly. I removed the orange ribbon, and increased the exposure and contrast while adding a bit of clarity and sharpness to just the color to make it the focal point.

in a few, I will be taking a few more pictures to round out the rest of the article

Screen Shot 2015-09-14 at 10.34.08 AM by Ty June, on Flickr
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BigAl: there is a huge difference between working out to be healthy, and ingesting 10 protein shakes a day, creatine, roids, etc.
JoeyBalls: Yup. That's why I said I workout to look good. If i wanted to be healthy. I'd swim.


..you can NEVER out train a bad diet -- FitExcellence

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#8364363 - 09/14/15 09:42 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Senor Eduardo_82]
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 Originally Posted By: eddie _69
Two things I don't recall ever seeing in an ad:

-The product being out of focus
-A line break in the text (wait-ing)

To add to this...part of the product being set within the page fold. Get it first and foremost on that 2nd page. Show us a sample of what you have (text wise) but use image B.

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#8364434 - 09/14/15 10:26 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: LNXGUY]
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 Originally Posted By: LNXGUY
Did you just watermark someone elses photo? LOL
oh damn, lol...I think my Flickr or lighteoom did it automatically.

My bad, Duc.
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#8364452 - 09/14/15 10:33 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: ]
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 Originally Posted By: tenplanescrashing
 Originally Posted By: eddie _69
Two things I don't recall ever seeing in an ad:

-The product being out of focus
-A line break in the text (wait-ing)

To add to this...part of the product being set within the page fold. Get it first and foremost on that 2nd page. Show us a sample of what you have (text wise) but use image B.


will do

thank you to all of you. i appreciate everything. the company just sent me their new company logo so I have to change that also
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BigAl: there is a huge difference between working out to be healthy, and ingesting 10 protein shakes a day, creatine, roids, etc.
JoeyBalls: Yup. That's why I said I workout to look good. If i wanted to be healthy. I'd swim.


..you can NEVER out train a bad diet -- FitExcellence

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#8365762 - 09/15/15 12:19 AM Re: Lead-in cover shot photo [Re: Duc]
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I might add some blur to the background in PS, the bokeh on that lens is distracting and busy.
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